Is this a good story for my character of an rpg club. Based on bleach?

My guy was part of Aizen's experiments when he was making the vizored. He was one of the supposed failed experiments. Aizen saw him having convulsions and thinks that he's just gonna die like the rest. What really happened is that his hollow is a shape shifter and he kept getting confused and the inner battle lasted very long. He eventually made it to the real world after he heard the other vizards were expelled from soul society. Later on he meet all the vizards but he really didn't like them so he went into training by himself. He would though stop buy and talk and give gifts to the other vizards. He gave Shinji the trench coat he fights Grimmjow with. In the fight for fake Karakura Town he was watching the battles when he heard a sound so he decided to follow it. Eventually he found a arrancar wearing the normal uniform but in a Victorian era style. Like Dracula. So he ask the man who he is and whats he doing. He says normally that he's Aizen's secret weapon and that he was going to fight the wolf looking man. My guy tells him that that's captain Komamura and, that he's his enemy now. My guy acts like the captain of the ninth squad and really doesn't get into it. Eventually the arrancar gets mad and starts fighting harder. So my guy unleashes his shikai. Which looks like nun chucks but made of steel and his uniform changes and looks like Ken's from street fighter. My guy starts attacking but the arrancar takes out his sword and blocks it all. So my guy decides to show the secret ability. The nun chucks can be made into steel and the chain never ends. The arrancar gets pissed and unleashes his resurreccion form. So he does my saying rise from your grave Vampiro. The arrancar looks exactly the same but his sword gets covered in hollow mask like material and his clothes change to a complete Victorian suit. He starts attacking my guy. My guy gets over powered and decides to use his bankai. When he does his clothes turn silver and he gains gloves and elbow guards. So The get back to fighting. My guy reveals that he can turn the elbow guards in anything he wants made of metal and that He can grow spikes on the gloves. In bankai my guy starts beating the crap out of the arrancar. The arrancar backs of and tells him that the Dracula stories were of him in his vasto lordes and that he would show him self to humans to scare them. Then he tells me to remember that Dracula can grow Wings, fangs, and claws. So he stick his sword in his hollow hole and turns it. A bunch of mist surround Him then it goes away. Then the arrancar looks like Dracula in Van Hellsing with the wings, fangs, and claws. He says that this is his Murcelago form and that my guy is going to die now. My guy attacks first but gets clawed up by the arrancar. But the bleeding stops almost instantly. My guy reveals that while in bankai if he ever gets cut a thin sheet of metal covers the wound and changes color to look like his skin, and that he can do up to five more layers on top of one another. The arrancar attacks this time and knocks my threw a building. He thinks I'm dead and turns away. But then I appear with my hollow mask and he ask me why I'm wearing a useless mask. I explain that I'm a vizard and that my mask changes faces from time to time but that now I'm able to control it. Then a let it change into his face and star fighting him. I cut of his arm and break his leg. He says he also has a healing ability and heals it right back.He also says that his healing ability isn't limited like other arrancar. So I cut of both arms, breaks both legs, and start trying to rip off the wings. When I'm doing this he heals one of his arms and go to claw at me. I dodge it and break his arm again. I ask him that the only way to kill him would be to totally get rid of him right? He said thats true but that I cant do that. So I say before I kill you what is your number? He says none. With that my guy rips off the wings completely and starts charging a silver cero. My guy says that this is his cero metalico and that the fight ends now. He shoots it and completely annihilates the arrancar.

By the way I don't have a name for the zanpakto. Any suggestions?
I wrote it wrong when I said the nun chucks turn to steel. They become spears. The chain never ends so that the spears can go far

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